This is the final volume of the House Trilogy, rounding out the events that took place a generation or so before the classic Frank Herbert series began. Having read six of the eight Herbert/Anderson releases now, I think it’s safe to say that I despise the writing style and most of the associated choices. I’ve described all of my issues with the poor writing in the past, and there’s little reason to revisit that long list now.
Instead, I will be focusing on issues with the plot. One problem with the House Trilogy is that the end of the story is already written in stone. There’s a sense of fatal inevitability to everything, and rather than use that as a strength, the authors choose to slide in a few major wars and conflicts to introduce unanticipated twists in the story.
This is a problem that crops up every time an author attempts to add to a tightly-bound canon. I see it all the time in tie-in fiction, especially some of the early “Babylon 5” or the “Buffy” novels. Events cannot rise above the noise threshold of the main story, or it’s something that should have been referenced in the original canon. When the established canon is a few decades old, there’s simply no excuse to overlook this basic principle.
Which means that the Great Spice War and everything related to the Tleilaxu and Project Amal simply doesn’t track as written. Of the two, Project Amal could have worked well enough, had all the activities been contained, meaning that all characters aware of the truth behind the axlotl tanks and the failed “amal” had been killed. Instead, major characters are aware of all this information, in flat contradiction to the canon.
Worse is the Great Spice War, which replaces the delicate scheming of Shaddam IV with heavy-handed destruction. Entire planets are wiped clean and several Houses are threatened, so much so that one would expect such a war to be mentioned rather significantly in “Dune” itself. In fact, if someone were reading this book before the original “Dune”, they might be fooled into believing that the Great Spice War was based entirely on references in the book itself. But nothing of that scale was ever mentioned.
Beyond the events themselves, the characters act according to such simplistic motivations that the subtlety of that future society is lost. The wheels within wheels of “Dune” were revealed through actions, not words, and one always had the sense that more was left concealed than ever seen. Too much stands exposed in this book (and in the Herbert/Anderson novels in general), and it seems odd that such open action would give way to far more sophisticated planning within the space of a single generation.
Other quibbles remain (the truth about Piter de Vries, the birthplace of Paul), and none of them should have happened, but it’s clear to me that the Herbert/Anderson novels will never properly mesh with the original canon. In the broad strokes, it might work (at least up to this point, as I’ve not read the concluding novels as yet), but only if the originals and new novels are seen as retelling history from two vastly different perspectives. Frank Herbert’s original novels would be a more philosophical approach based on deep study of individual accounts, while the new novels would be a more shallow, event-driven dramatization based loosely on fact. Both have a place, but the former is far more satisfying.
Rating: 5/10